Critique Please
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The bright background is taking attention away from the woman, who's stuck between seemingly back-lit, but front-lit at the same time, so things feel flat. I'm not sure what the blurry artifacts are in some random places, so maybe you can clarify that. I like the way you render her face and hands, and using a darker brown for both shape of shade as well as outline for her arm.


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Critique Please - by imPhelikz - 11-30-2015, 05:25 PM
RE: Critique Please - by meat - 12-02-2015, 02:24 PM
RE: Critique Please - by imPhelikz - 12-02-2015, 02:34 PM
RE: Critique Please - by Admbrns - 12-03-2015, 08:10 AM
RE: Critique Please - by imPhelikz - 12-03-2015, 08:19 AM
RE: Critique Please - by Bookend - 12-03-2015, 10:35 PM
RE: Critique Please - by imPhelikz - 12-04-2015, 04:51 AM
RE: Critique Please - by Alberto - 12-04-2015, 05:28 AM
RE: Critique Please - by imPhelikz - 12-04-2015, 07:09 AM

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