07-19-2020, 09:07 PM
Huge step up in the recent illustration dude!!! It's got a very harmonious look to it, the palette is really working. For any final touches or so I would look at the horns of the dragon as wel as the teeth. I would tint them just slightly into the yellowish and warmer colors because they stand out to me as being just a little bit too white within that environment. Remember, if the flames are a bright yellow like that, that's effectively a really yellow lamp so the color it would cast around it would be very yellow and warm.
Also, I think, take it with a grain of salt of course (everything that I say hehe) but the design of the horns themselves could be more exciting. They are somewhat generic right now and I feel like you have an excellent opportunity here to give them some character. You had other great design elements in the picture such as her having that tattoo on her thigh, the design of the staff etc but the horns (maybe also the claws coming off the wings. It's sort of like "What does horns look like?" and this would be the first image that springs to mind, but thinking about it deeper they could have some well thought out design that would give the dragon a bit more unique character. It can be very little!
Again, sweet step up and I'm excited to see where you'll go from here. :)
Also, I think, take it with a grain of salt of course (everything that I say hehe) but the design of the horns themselves could be more exciting. They are somewhat generic right now and I feel like you have an excellent opportunity here to give them some character. You had other great design elements in the picture such as her having that tattoo on her thigh, the design of the staff etc but the horns (maybe also the claws coming off the wings. It's sort of like "What does horns look like?" and this would be the first image that springs to mind, but thinking about it deeper they could have some well thought out design that would give the dragon a bit more unique character. It can be very little!
Again, sweet step up and I'm excited to see where you'll go from here. :)