10-12-2020, 02:25 AM
The wing don't look to convincing in my opinion i think you would need a bit more time to study bird wing fully understand why they allow flight right now she could not sure missing alot of different feather that allow for flight control and long feather generally are for decoration not flight.They look small and they seem as if she simple smashed some feather and some glue to her arm they don't look like they bend well together.The pose is sad and if that what your going for i think you got it i am not sure about cutting the composition in half with her wing those.An other bird you could put in the scene is the vulture in the back they would had something menacing to the scene.For the corpse maybe some bruise and blood could be nice touch of realism.For added movement some feather detaching for her wing fly off.Also watch out your first bird as created a couple of tangente with the pillar.Try to think of a color palette less saturated than usual and some sad color for future use.I think a sunset would be a create add to the overall story witht the subliminal idea that the end of the day represent the end of a life.
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