05-20-2021, 02:59 PM
Hey cg, thanks for stopping by my sketchbook. I'm really digging the mermaid piece, it's looking good! The main thing that sticks out for me is the lighting source not matching the story? As in, there is a 'spotlight' beam coming above from the middle of the sky (where the birds are) but the mermaids are shielding their eyes from (what we presume to be) a light source on the left. I don't think that means you have to veto the 'spotlight' altogether, but toning it down might help with the story