12-02-2021, 04:47 AM
The cat fur is kinda over powering in term of highlight. Where is the bottom light coming from ??? Also i think the yellow reflecting from the cat gear necklace might be over done so reduce the yellow specially since it shouldn't be all around since there a slight wrapping of undershirt around the neck .
Remember that value control and planning is a better solution to putting glare on object to make them ''pop''.
I added a blur to certain spot to diminish the overall focus of those area.I also kinda ajusted the cylinder behind it back and adjust it to reflect how i think the light should affect it.
Also remember to take time in the line art phase to check for tangente there one with the hat and the cat ear.
I ajusted the collar value since the light come from the top left.
I also added a little bit of stronger shadow where two surface touch for example the forearm against the upper arm creating a crease.
Remember that value control and planning is a better solution to putting glare on object to make them ''pop''.
I added a blur to certain spot to diminish the overall focus of those area.I also kinda ajusted the cylinder behind it back and adjust it to reflect how i think the light should affect it.
Also remember to take time in the line art phase to check for tangente there one with the hat and the cat ear.
I ajusted the collar value since the light come from the top left.
I also added a little bit of stronger shadow where two surface touch for example the forearm against the upper arm creating a crease.
My Sketchbook
The journey of an artist truly begin when he can learn from everyone error.
Teamwork make your dream work.
Asking help is the key to growth.
The journey of an artist truly begin when he can learn from everyone error.
Teamwork make your dream work.
Asking help is the key to growth.