01-11-2022, 08:00 AM
I don't like the way is arm and shoulder is behind is head.It more as if he stiking a pause than what is know for(running)
The dynamism is lost because of how little he lean foward and the leg aren't there so there a diminishing feeling of hIM running.I recommend you take a look at slow motion of Olympic sprinter when they reach there top speed so you got a better idea of the gesture necessary to create aerodynamism and a sense of extreme speed.
I think overal you would be better with a horizontal framing most flash piece i seen use that format.
Where are the premiliminary drawing... why do you set on a design so fast?There should be a thumbnail stage there should be a selection process.
The dynamism is lost because of how little he lean foward and the leg aren't there so there a diminishing feeling of hIM running.I recommend you take a look at slow motion of Olympic sprinter when they reach there top speed so you got a better idea of the gesture necessary to create aerodynamism and a sense of extreme speed.
I think overal you would be better with a horizontal framing most flash piece i seen use that format.
Where are the premiliminary drawing... why do you set on a design so fast?There should be a thumbnail stage there should be a selection process.
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