03-31-2022, 02:49 AM
I will try a last attempt at convincing you not to over do the lightning in general. I find this stage perfectly acceptable. Maybe except the foreground grass that added a bit more depth i find it was already pretty much done everything made sense.So i hope you can excuse me for being a broken record.I think you treat the skin as something with way to much specular reflection .Which you should reserve for metallic surface in my personal opinion. Look at how little even a metallic surface give specular highlight an how small the radius of the specular is depending of course on the distance from the viewer.
One thing that is odd to me is why we see such a strong lighting when the background is so dark.Also we see rock but it a grassy terrain those are a few of the inconsistency of the storytelling in my opinion.This lightning could be possible but i would say it would have to be an artificial light like a spotlight which doesn't make sense here since it seem to be taking place outside
One note concerning the force it generally a blueish aura for the jedi and it true for yoda in particular which you can find picture of where he is shown with it if you want to stay true to the color symbolism.
I still like it regardless of how brutal my critic might be toward you it always with my best intent.
One thing that is odd to me is why we see such a strong lighting when the background is so dark.Also we see rock but it a grassy terrain those are a few of the inconsistency of the storytelling in my opinion.This lightning could be possible but i would say it would have to be an artificial light like a spotlight which doesn't make sense here since it seem to be taking place outside
One note concerning the force it generally a blueish aura for the jedi and it true for yoda in particular which you can find picture of where he is shown with it if you want to stay true to the color symbolism.
I still like it regardless of how brutal my critic might be toward you it always with my best intent.
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