04-25-2022, 08:29 AM
So first of all good job on the sketch.
Here a few observation and suggestion.
The tiger head might be a bit to small.
Those bra are anti gravity? They don't even seem to have thickness either strange.
The back foot look a bit to much like a sock.
The grass also in the foreground seem to be alligning and are to equidistant which is a sign of human made design which make the composition a bit obvious.
I also suggest to revisit those ellipse on the staff to be less flat but actually follow the change in degre related to the perspective.Also i would like to see you add thickness to those leather band on the staff grip.
Here a few observation and suggestion.
The tiger head might be a bit to small.
Those bra are anti gravity? They don't even seem to have thickness either strange.
The back foot look a bit to much like a sock.
The grass also in the foreground seem to be alligning and are to equidistant which is a sign of human made design which make the composition a bit obvious.
I also suggest to revisit those ellipse on the staff to be less flat but actually follow the change in degre related to the perspective.Also i would like to see you add thickness to those leather band on the staff grip.
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Teamwork make your dream work.
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