08-19-2022, 05:43 AM
Well now that you ajusted the picture it seem one of the pillar isn't supporting anything.Also one question why is there two color for the pillar?
One other note is how the elbow curve when it should be more angular.
I think i would get rid of the plant behind her they don't serve much of a purpose atleast for me and the cast shadow nearby could be a nice way to add flow to the image.
The space between her nose and top lips seem extremly small almost as if she had excessive botox injection.I think pulling down the mouth with the lasso or redoing it might be a good idea.But i think this would more of a nitpick it minimal since the amount of detail in the piece is high enough that it can go under the radar.But personally i think we would see more of the mouth than you shown us.
One other note is how the elbow curve when it should be more angular.
I think i would get rid of the plant behind her they don't serve much of a purpose atleast for me and the cast shadow nearby could be a nice way to add flow to the image.
The space between her nose and top lips seem extremly small almost as if she had excessive botox injection.I think pulling down the mouth with the lasso or redoing it might be a good idea.But i think this would more of a nitpick it minimal since the amount of detail in the piece is high enough that it can go under the radar.But personally i think we would see more of the mouth than you shown us.
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