08-31-2022, 03:05 PM
Hi George,
First off — I LOVE this composition. The figures are very well done, and I don't see any issues with proportion or poses. Although I do kinda like Lydo's take on it. But I think yours still works fine as well.
You're hitting pay-dirt when it comes to getting suggestions — but I wanted to add a couple of my own.
Your base has an MC Escher feel to it where her feet are (I don't mean offense by that and hope you get the 'reference' joke). Are her feet resting on that area or dangling somehow?
Also his foot is balanced on just the tip — so I think extending the base out a bit where it's resting would solve that.
I did this quick "paint-over" of those areas to try and show you what I mean.
Anyway — this is a very ambitious piece. As someone said above (and I can't find it now because I'm tired) their expressions are great (you always do those so well.)
I'm sure you're going to make this one another fantastic piece.
Can't wait to see how you progress.
First off — I LOVE this composition. The figures are very well done, and I don't see any issues with proportion or poses. Although I do kinda like Lydo's take on it. But I think yours still works fine as well.
You're hitting pay-dirt when it comes to getting suggestions — but I wanted to add a couple of my own.
Your base has an MC Escher feel to it where her feet are (I don't mean offense by that and hope you get the 'reference' joke). Are her feet resting on that area or dangling somehow?
Also his foot is balanced on just the tip — so I think extending the base out a bit where it's resting would solve that.
I did this quick "paint-over" of those areas to try and show you what I mean.
Anyway — this is a very ambitious piece. As someone said above (and I can't find it now because I'm tired) their expressions are great (you always do those so well.)
I'm sure you're going to make this one another fantastic piece.
Can't wait to see how you progress.