10-23-2022, 02:03 AM
I am not a master at anatomy but is chest look strange to me not sure how much the latex strenching would hide the overlapping of the pectoral muscle over the belly i think adding a hint of the pectoral muscle in the silhouette would help and pushing in the belly section.I suspect the s is a reason as to why you simplify this space so try to find the balance between anatomy and readability.
The s could be resized to be more evident i would say.I don't like the head pose it not looking at the viewer which i think is a miss opportunity to create the illusion of supermen going out of the page.
I change the cape a bit because i don't like the shape that look like arrow pointing toward top left.
I also flip the canva so that we shift the focus to the front fist rather than the back fist.
I tweak the face because i didn't like how far the likeness was to what i would say represent the face of supermen.Your feature were to pointy which make him look like is evil counter form bizzaro.
The s could be resized to be more evident i would say.I don't like the head pose it not looking at the viewer which i think is a miss opportunity to create the illusion of supermen going out of the page.
I change the cape a bit because i don't like the shape that look like arrow pointing toward top left.
I also flip the canva so that we shift the focus to the front fist rather than the back fist.
I tweak the face because i didn't like how far the likeness was to what i would say represent the face of supermen.Your feature were to pointy which make him look like is evil counter form bizzaro.
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