12-24-2022, 03:23 PM
Try to do the left hand pose the little finger can't bend this far away from the rest.You can always use the right and mirror it and than just trace and change it slightly to save time.
For the book stack on the right i would try to give more direction to the tome not just one direction this create a better feeling of a working environnement where thing aren't always kept perfectly organize.For the object on top of the stack i would change it to a adjustable mirror.
For the cranium on the bookshelf a head doesn't rest on the jaw due to the weight of the weight of the brain cavity. Reference would be a good thing.
For the crystal ball i suppose it this big because you want to show something inside it but if it not that important you could try to reduce the size of the ball and add a decorative stand.
I am not sure about all the random eye laying around maybe you could have enchanted floating eye a kind of security system when she busy to guard he back or maybe one eye homunculus if you know what they are.
For the candle i would say try enlarge the base so that it suggest that wax is building up at the base.Not just a straight candle with wax dripping which would look easy to fall over.Also maybe instead of the wax collecting on surface you could put them in little plate so the wax collect there instead of the table.
It to busy on the table on the right side to many thing overlapping and some show so little of there base i think you didn't think of how they would overlap in space but they occupy the same space.I am think of that bottle behind the thing that look like almost a sand timer before the stack of book.
For the bottle of poison the wrapping is to much on the bottom part also the line of the label should feel perpendicular to the side of the bottle.
Other than that i am scared mama please come pick me up!!!
For the book stack on the right i would try to give more direction to the tome not just one direction this create a better feeling of a working environnement where thing aren't always kept perfectly organize.For the object on top of the stack i would change it to a adjustable mirror.
For the cranium on the bookshelf a head doesn't rest on the jaw due to the weight of the weight of the brain cavity. Reference would be a good thing.
For the crystal ball i suppose it this big because you want to show something inside it but if it not that important you could try to reduce the size of the ball and add a decorative stand.
I am not sure about all the random eye laying around maybe you could have enchanted floating eye a kind of security system when she busy to guard he back or maybe one eye homunculus if you know what they are.
For the candle i would say try enlarge the base so that it suggest that wax is building up at the base.Not just a straight candle with wax dripping which would look easy to fall over.Also maybe instead of the wax collecting on surface you could put them in little plate so the wax collect there instead of the table.
It to busy on the table on the right side to many thing overlapping and some show so little of there base i think you didn't think of how they would overlap in space but they occupy the same space.I am think of that bottle behind the thing that look like almost a sand timer before the stack of book.
For the bottle of poison the wrapping is to much on the bottom part also the line of the label should feel perpendicular to the side of the bottle.
Other than that i am scared mama please come pick me up!!!
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Teamwork make your dream work.
Asking help is the key to growth.