02-12-2023, 06:40 PM
I think the light doesn't reflect necessary the weather still to much constrast i assume the sun is hidden behind cloud and if they are in a forest there even more cover.To much reflected light in the beard i think also. There is no consideration for the pit of the arm in term of gradation of light.
I think i also like the version before you made so much snow.This look to cold for your usual palette.
When you putted the snow you didn't really change the way contrast was handle and that show in the final i would say before that it was working like intented i would argue so i am not sure if you planned to add the snow early on in your mind or if you took a last minute decision but i don't see the change necessary to account for it.But i could be wrong the way you made the light can still occur naturally under specific condition.The problem with light is a critic doesn't know you intention and they are outside the scene so it complicate were attempt to give meaningful advise.
I like how the yellow of the leaf bring attention to krotos in the pre final version face contrary to the redish tone that blend with where should be looking first in the final version.
One thing with snow is to consider the loose of visiblity as it goes back into the distance just in case this is not something you are already actively think about it similar to fog but less it different depending on the wind condition and fog generally is more local to ground level will snow visiblity depend on many factor and snow come in different size and type powdery snow for example made visiblity worst when wind condition are high will wet snow on the other as i would call less of a problem in high wind scenario as it stay to the ground due to the humidity.
*This is not a paint over just how it look before the last big change.
I think i also like the version before you made so much snow.This look to cold for your usual palette.
When you putted the snow you didn't really change the way contrast was handle and that show in the final i would say before that it was working like intented i would argue so i am not sure if you planned to add the snow early on in your mind or if you took a last minute decision but i don't see the change necessary to account for it.But i could be wrong the way you made the light can still occur naturally under specific condition.The problem with light is a critic doesn't know you intention and they are outside the scene so it complicate were attempt to give meaningful advise.
I like how the yellow of the leaf bring attention to krotos in the pre final version face contrary to the redish tone that blend with where should be looking first in the final version.
One thing with snow is to consider the loose of visiblity as it goes back into the distance just in case this is not something you are already actively think about it similar to fog but less it different depending on the wind condition and fog generally is more local to ground level will snow visiblity depend on many factor and snow come in different size and type powdery snow for example made visiblity worst when wind condition are high will wet snow on the other as i would call less of a problem in high wind scenario as it stay to the ground due to the humidity.
*This is not a paint over just how it look before the last big change.
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Teamwork make your dream work.
Asking help is the key to growth.