11-05-2023, 04:54 AM
I feel like a more delicate blade with low amount of curve would work better this one feel to thick and to aggresive in the silhouette i would make the handle more rounded and curve and have the blade more fluid and less angular but rather some nice long sweep curve.I would also keep the blade fairly thin toward the guard rather than thick.
The chin doesn't make sense for me right now it not following the perpective i visualize here we like see to much chin and not enough neck and the neck is to straight it should have a slight bend toward the chin as the head rotate.
Those feet heel look rather bulbous at fist glance. The hand and arm could feel a bit more delicate and thinner and the knee look abit to blocky which i think would go against the gracefulness of a fey that up to you. Right now i suggest to remove the line and create a softer gradiant to indicat the form change on the knee.For example the pelvis is more blocky that where i would put line because it bone really ''poking''
For the wing i would say try something with asymmetry for some dynamism also the back wing is clearly higher then it should be in perspective it what happen if you try to force something just to ''show more'' sometime more is less you already got 3 wing you don't need the fourth to get the idea across even if it might be pleasing to the eye.
The chin doesn't make sense for me right now it not following the perpective i visualize here we like see to much chin and not enough neck and the neck is to straight it should have a slight bend toward the chin as the head rotate.
Those feet heel look rather bulbous at fist glance. The hand and arm could feel a bit more delicate and thinner and the knee look abit to blocky which i think would go against the gracefulness of a fey that up to you. Right now i suggest to remove the line and create a softer gradiant to indicat the form change on the knee.For example the pelvis is more blocky that where i would put line because it bone really ''poking''
For the wing i would say try something with asymmetry for some dynamism also the back wing is clearly higher then it should be in perspective it what happen if you try to force something just to ''show more'' sometime more is less you already got 3 wing you don't need the fourth to get the idea across even if it might be pleasing to the eye.
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