05-09-2024, 03:20 AM
How are they even moving around the sail is none existent do they have a motor in the back? Are they ghost?I play with that concept in the POV trying to tie them with a story of sailor who sink after hearing her song now they haunt the reef.This would explain why the boat look like it emerging from the water.
I would tone down the splashing when thing splash you have a gradation of smaller droplet at the top and bigger blob at the spike of the wave.
I added a reference to explain my thought process.
Also regarding the moon i think you need a bit of a darker sky if you want the sun and the moon to be out instead of what look like a almost 4 o clock lightining .Also you want the sky more satured the closer it is to us.In mine the sky make no sense since it should be dark close to the horizon where the rainbow is but it lighter which make it surrealistic and let the rainbow breath.
I did a small Pov and took the liberty to go surealistic with the light because rainbow don't form without rain also just in case you did not know.
I gave her skin a more orange tone to harmonize the tone and if she like sunbathing it would be natural.
You can make choose that break natural convention but i think you need to assume them and push them to the point they look deliberate rather then unintentional.
I would tone down the splashing when thing splash you have a gradation of smaller droplet at the top and bigger blob at the spike of the wave.
I added a reference to explain my thought process.
Also regarding the moon i think you need a bit of a darker sky if you want the sun and the moon to be out instead of what look like a almost 4 o clock lightining .Also you want the sky more satured the closer it is to us.In mine the sky make no sense since it should be dark close to the horizon where the rainbow is but it lighter which make it surrealistic and let the rainbow breath.
I did a small Pov and took the liberty to go surealistic with the light because rainbow don't form without rain also just in case you did not know.
I gave her skin a more orange tone to harmonize the tone and if she like sunbathing it would be natural.
You can make choose that break natural convention but i think you need to assume them and push them to the point they look deliberate rather then unintentional.