03-05-2016, 08:41 AM
Heyo,
Great piece!
Heres what I feel you could explore. working the shading in the shaded areas of the character, as well as neutralizing some of the harsh black edges in the fingers, the cogwheel on the bench, etc.
Also, toned down the brightness(contrast) of the lit patches of grass as well as the bg, to allow the contrast on the character to be dominant.
Hope it helps give you some ideas!
Sorry for fudging the shape on the hair, just noticed it as I was posting T.T
Keep up the great work!
Great piece!
Heres what I feel you could explore. working the shading in the shaded areas of the character, as well as neutralizing some of the harsh black edges in the fingers, the cogwheel on the bench, etc.
Also, toned down the brightness(contrast) of the lit patches of grass as well as the bg, to allow the contrast on the character to be dominant.
Hope it helps give you some ideas!
Sorry for fudging the shape on the hair, just noticed it as I was posting T.T
Keep up the great work!