03-08-2017, 04:03 AM
Hello Tindeer! Thanks for commenting on my featherless chicken, I'll be sure to draw you another one as soon as I can!
Now, I shall commence the critique-ing process, as per request ;). On the first colored painting in your last post. I think the style is pretty cool, it's not yet realistic but there are definitely some stylistic choices going on which I really like. There are some lighting direction issues, I think there should be more light on the rocks in the left side. Alternatively, you can darken the rocks in the top right to be as dark as the left, then you'd suggest the lady being in some sort of grove/cave with a sliver of light coming in through a crack. Other than that I think the composition has a lot of potential, and I like how you handled cast shadows on the lady.
Hope I've been of some help, if you would like me to do a paintover or something to show you what I mean I'd be more than happy to.
Now, I shall commence the critique-ing process, as per request ;). On the first colored painting in your last post. I think the style is pretty cool, it's not yet realistic but there are definitely some stylistic choices going on which I really like. There are some lighting direction issues, I think there should be more light on the rocks in the left side. Alternatively, you can darken the rocks in the top right to be as dark as the left, then you'd suggest the lady being in some sort of grove/cave with a sliver of light coming in through a crack. Other than that I think the composition has a lot of potential, and I like how you handled cast shadows on the lady.
Hope I've been of some help, if you would like me to do a paintover or something to show you what I mean I'd be more than happy to.
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