Monkeybread's Dribblings

[Kaffer]

Hey, the finished environment is awesome, on the retro sci-fi stuff: Cool overall mood, what I think is missing is a bit more clear handling of focal points. Is it the guy in the front? Is it the well-lit area in the midground? Is it the guy in the back? Somehow I can't decide who the main element of the picture is.. I'd try pushing the shiny crystal things back a bit (they deflect attention from the more important stuff because they are relatively contrasted) and decrease contrast in the background, that massive structure in the back could be pushed back with aerial perspective, plus where the sun is it looks like if it was a bit transparent. (Is the sun even necessary?)
Other than that, cool composition, I think it definitely would be worth some extra thought.. :)