02-19-2017, 09:12 PM
Lovely work, shame you're trying to get away from the cartoony style, I think it looks great but to each their own.
One critique I have is that you might want to try sharpening up some of your edges, especially around the eyes since they are the focal point of faces and body's, you don't need to overdo it the soft edges look lovely especially on that bluish elf piece but maybe try sharpening them around the facial features(this barring the blonde haired woman who's already got a lot of nice edges on the face.)
Also I just noticed you were doing a Ghirahim piece, damn I wish you worked more on that, we need more fan art of that gloriously flamboyant bastard XD.
![[Image: tumblr_nbwtmmRrmK1rf0hsxo3_500.gif]](https://33.media.tumblr.com/9d9320a39690c73b48c873812f178a42/tumblr_nbwtmmRrmK1rf0hsxo3_500.gif)
One critique I have is that you might want to try sharpening up some of your edges, especially around the eyes since they are the focal point of faces and body's, you don't need to overdo it the soft edges look lovely especially on that bluish elf piece but maybe try sharpening them around the facial features(this barring the blonde haired woman who's already got a lot of nice edges on the face.)
Also I just noticed you were doing a Ghirahim piece, damn I wish you worked more on that, we need more fan art of that gloriously flamboyant bastard XD.
