CC 4: Probability (of Finishing) Game
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Fantastic feedback!! I tend to write too much in general, so I knew the dialogue was going to have to be cut heavily. You made some great replacements there which I will swipe haha.

You mostly got the narrative right, they are all just betting on different species...not necessarily their own. Most don't bet on humanity, except for one of them (not sure which yet). I chose this because although I think we would make a sure bet, it sets up the angry reactions of the gods losing in the last reveal panel, which I thought could be funny. I leave it ambiguous what happens to the other planets....basically no one cares, once the first species annihilates itself haha. Seems pretty god like to not give a shit hehe.

Thanos for the link, I'll check it out! I definitely want to finish this....might be a week or two before I get the time.

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RE: CC 4: Probability (of Finishing) Game - by Amit Dutta - 06-26-2016, 11:23 AM

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