06-26-2016, 07:02 AM
D: Man, this hits me in the gut! It's so poignant... And all the work you put into it!! Maan, you put me to shame...
It reads really well, and I think it's clear and concise, no line wasted. I'm not sure if there's much more crit I can offer!!
Perhaps to give it a more "unified" look, you might want to smooth out where the traditional ink and the digital black lines meet. Or visa versa; recreate the traditional ink texture everywhere. It's more of a nitpick though.
An example of what I mean is in this page: http://www.minnasundberg.fi/comic/page526.php
This artist lined her pages with brush and ink, and used the ink texture as part of the comic. I can see where you've painted in with the black in digital over some of the traditional ink, there's a little bit of an "unbalanced" look.
I hope that makes sense... if it doesn't, no worries!! It's more of a nit-pick!
Really good stuff!!
It reads really well, and I think it's clear and concise, no line wasted. I'm not sure if there's much more crit I can offer!!
Perhaps to give it a more "unified" look, you might want to smooth out where the traditional ink and the digital black lines meet. Or visa versa; recreate the traditional ink texture everywhere. It's more of a nitpick though.
An example of what I mean is in this page: http://www.minnasundberg.fi/comic/page526.php
This artist lined her pages with brush and ink, and used the ink texture as part of the comic. I can see where you've painted in with the black in digital over some of the traditional ink, there's a little bit of an "unbalanced" look.
I hope that makes sense... if it doesn't, no worries!! It's more of a nit-pick!
Really good stuff!!