06-19-2016, 11:24 PM
hey dude, didn't seem to notice it before but that second row it feels like the action is going the wrong way, you could try flipping the panels horizontally so we 'read' down the arm into the punch and flow through into the panel where he's being knocked over. Just a thought, might be worth to try ^^
EDIT Realised what you're trying to do with the fist coming down and his arm going across to make a zig zag. I think the angle between his arm and the punching arm is too shallow, increase it a bit and it could work better (just my opinion though, could be bad advice!). You can also use his eyes to push the viewer back across to the right, just have him looking even a little bit to the right and it'll work - I think as human's, a character's eyes can override a lot of other directional cues.
EDIT Realised what you're trying to do with the fist coming down and his arm going across to make a zig zag. I think the angle between his arm and the punching arm is too shallow, increase it a bit and it could work better (just my opinion though, could be bad advice!). You can also use his eyes to push the viewer back across to the right, just have him looking even a little bit to the right and it'll work - I think as human's, a character's eyes can override a lot of other directional cues.