06-20-2016, 01:48 PM
is this about a fighter and her medical aid/coach ?
Perhaps things will become clearer when the art develops, but yeah I am having a little bit of trouble following. I like that it is a small snapshot of what could be a wider story but it feels self contained though, so good job on that, and keep it going!!
*Edit. I didn't read your backstory first on purpose, to see if the story on the page itself was self contained without any explanation. I see now what the story is...and I got it sort of right but also wrong, which to me indicates a bit of work to be done on making things clearer on page I guess.
Perhaps things will become clearer when the art develops, but yeah I am having a little bit of trouble following. I like that it is a small snapshot of what could be a wider story but it feels self contained though, so good job on that, and keep it going!!
*Edit. I didn't read your backstory first on purpose, to see if the story on the page itself was self contained without any explanation. I see now what the story is...and I got it sort of right but also wrong, which to me indicates a bit of work to be done on making things clearer on page I guess.