Zorrentos Sketchbook

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One thing i would say but might not be extremely worth mentioning is that the first issue most of the image i see have are proportion issue.

Secondly what i notice would be that some of the value should be darker than you made them to be.

One advise is to squint often with your eye when simplifying value.

For porportion is about spacetial relation of point and using all the straight line you can to help construct the image.

Of course it much hard to get proportion right if you don't know the proportion of the face.Being able to visualize a centerline on the face is a really important aspect of drawing face.

I hope this was worth reading.