Zorrentos Sketchbook

[darktiste]

Hi Zorrentos personally if i had any comment it probably about the lettering in the secret valley piece i don't know exactly how big it really going to be but i think people shouldn't have to click on a image to read anything but that my personal opinion.I find the descriptive to small but kinda i feel like you had reason here since there so much stuff on the page.But i than read that this a personal project so you can do pretty much whatever you want which for me would probably mean splitting up some element and grouping some for example i would take the 2 big character and put them as a turn around with the text and the props would be on there own as well as the expression sheet.I would probably also move the logo more toward the extreme left if in every piece since i think it as alot of important to let the viewer know about what the name of the project.

One other advise i might have is don't over use rim light choose where you want the attention to be let place for the eye to rest that what create flow toward your focal point.