In need for critiq
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Very interesting, I like the story you're laying out here. The biggest issue I see is your composition isn't very fitting for the scene. The straight side view come of as very static. You may have a reason for this choice, but there's better fitting compositions for what it seems your story is here. 

I really like the interior you're setting up. Is there any reason for that one window to be lower than the rest? I would suggest, before you go any further with painting, to really refine your line art and get your perspective spot on. If you haven't- use some reference pictures of old churches and courtrooms to really nail the look you're going for.


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In need for critiq - by Big Bomb - 09-19-2016, 05:01 AM
RE: In need for critiq - by Zipfelzeus - 09-19-2016, 06:27 AM
RE: In need for critiq - by Big Bomb - 09-21-2016, 01:28 AM
RE: In need for critiq - by Admbrns - 09-20-2016, 03:35 AM
RE: In need for critiq - by Big Bomb - 09-21-2016, 01:43 AM
RE: In need for critiq - by Admbrns - 09-24-2016, 10:41 AM

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