In need for critiq

[Big Bomb]

Very interesting, I like the story you're laying out here. The biggest issue I see is your composition isn't very fitting for the scene. The straight side view come of as very static. You may have a reason for this choice, but there's better fitting compositions for what it seems your story is here. 

I really like the interior you're setting up. Is there any reason for that one window to be lower than the rest? I would suggest, before you go any further with painting, to really refine your line art and get your perspective spot on. If you haven't- use some reference pictures of old churches and courtrooms to really nail the look you're going for.

My idea was that the judge stood up and lean toward the girl to look at her closer, and crowd filing the purpose of showing that girl is an alien/danger to them. So, if you have some idea on what composition will fit better please share. 
Wow the perspective is really off, i was noticing that there something wrong, but not really paid attention to it.
Thanks for reply.