Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram
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Dude, this is some mad mileage. It's great to see you putting in this kind of quantity. I'm surprised no one's commented/welcomed you yet! haha.

Allow me to be the first. Welcome to CD!

A bit of critique below :D.


keep focusing on construction/proportions! Watch the spacing of your eyes for your heads as well-- things are getting a bit askew and slanted.

I'd say you could slow down for a few (maybe a 5-6) and see how things go with some erasing and correction. There's things you're only going to notice if you focus on one for a long time as opposed to blasting through 20+ haha.

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Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 11-11-2016, 12:51 PM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 11-11-2016, 01:18 PM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 11-14-2016, 02:51 PM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 11-19-2016, 01:18 PM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by Einver - 11-19-2016, 09:21 PM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 11-21-2016, 04:15 AM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 11-24-2016, 01:32 PM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 11-29-2016, 02:23 PM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 12-03-2016, 02:18 PM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 12-08-2016, 03:49 PM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 12-15-2016, 04:14 PM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 12-16-2016, 03:09 PM
RE: Struggle and Hardwork by Jey Ram - by JeyRam - 12-21-2016, 02:55 PM
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