Comic thesis crits, please?
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Aaand page 4! I think I'm good on the perspective for the first panel, could someone tell me if it's off? Another thing I'm somewhat unsure of is whether I should somehow show magic around the plants to show them levitating? I'm just a little worried it isn't immediately obvious that they're magically levitating. But I think I'll tackle that issue when I start inking.

In the last panel, she's saying "Why would I need anyone when I have all of you?"

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Then I think I have the idea for the second comic figured out...it'll take place in China, I think. The story so far follows a girl who keeps spying on this small house in the woods, where a weird woman lives. She eventually trips and hurts herself outside the house, and wakes up to find the woman watching over her, where her house is filled with all kinds of potions and odd ingredients. I haven't nailed it down quite yet, and will probably end up changing it. I also haven't done any sketches of them yet, so expect them eventually!

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Comic thesis crits, please? - by ZombieChinchilla - 12-30-2016, 08:25 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Artloader - 12-30-2016, 09:12 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Admbrns - 12-31-2016, 08:20 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by John - 01-02-2017, 02:33 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by RottenPocket - 01-04-2017, 09:02 PM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by John - 01-06-2017, 12:42 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by meat - 01-06-2017, 01:21 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Admbrns - 01-12-2017, 09:49 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by ZombieChinchilla - 01-14-2017, 08:04 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Alopex - 01-14-2017, 08:32 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Alopex - 01-14-2017, 08:48 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Artloader - 01-19-2017, 08:40 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Artloader - 03-03-2017, 09:31 AM

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