Progress, critique is always welcomed!

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Heeeeyyy I found your SB!!
Nice stuff in here, lots of studies! Hmm, we need more imaginative stuff for sure!

Eyyyy xD 
Yeah, I agree. This week I'm working on some environment practice so I'll see what I can do with my imagination :D To be honest I lack pretty heavily in the creativity department even though that's the most important part of design haha. I'll work on it tho!

Look at the arm you drew that's coming out, the way the deltoid lines up with the pectoralis, it's like cut off, like it dips in whereas the original its rounded out. In the original he's got a leeeetle bit more stomach and theres a very subtle tilt in the way his stomach is that's important but hard to nail in a gesture. Also his thighs and calves in particular are a tad longer. Pay a little attention also to the way his nose in yours is slanting into the cavity of the eye socket, it's very subtle.

Ah, I really should have paid more attention to these things. I'll try to improve my observational skills for sure and hopefully learning anatomy will lead to me making more informed painting/drawings that are more accurate as well. Thanks for pointing out these things, it's very helpful :) especially the part about the nose, I feel the face isn't too accurate.

Oh and ur so young but so good OMG XX <3

I feel regretful including my age, I think my art seems better than it actually is when I put my age in front of it haha... I'll prob delete that part   but thanks anyhow