Joseph's shiny new sketchbook

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I think personally my eye would say to add more texture to the roof and to keep the detail around the door and the window.Also for the mock up considering value is very important because white tend to really squatter light more then if you use color so you can try to remplace that white some color to the 3d model if you want to know where the color will mix when thing squatter but i am sure you have lot more experience then me in ajusting your color and value base on pure greyscale.

I just said that because i saw the green grass and the white none descriptive color of the house and i felt it wouldn't have taken much time to change the color not that it necessary.

One thing you could do would be to texture that scene with a phototexture and fill up the gap with some hand painting by saving a render of the scene and editing on any art program you use.The texture is more of a suggestion then it use as a final in generally because to speed up thing you would create a seamless texture that repeat itself over the specific zone you have in mind for that texture.So handpaint here is more about breaking that repeativeness and removing artefact or noise sometime if you want to make big scene you don't have to pain every grass of blade and it still look fine from a distance...

I just don't know how you use your mock up if it only to visualize or if you also build from it...so that why i suggest something that might be new to you maybe you never thought about 3d ''photobashing''