Razor's 2019 Sketchbook

[Amit Dutta]

Hey dude. Picture This by Molly Bang is all about composition if you want probably the best book on it, though the best way to 'learn' composition is to do many of them. That said yours aren't bad...just keep pushing those boundaries every now and then. Using flat shapes is great but it is too easy to flatten perspectives like a telephoto lens unless you keep perspective in mind while creating shapes.

Also you're a kiwi right...in Welly, I forget? If so there's a local studio that has classes that you might be interested in that I'm going to..trad focused but huge fundamentals gains and for serious people not dabblers. Let me know if you want to know more.