06-09-2012, 06:09 PM
Nice work here, thanks a ton for the comment! The brushstrokes in your studies look excellently precise and controlled, that's something I need to work on. Great to see someone who watched DBZ, that show was half of my childhood :D
I like your caricatures, but it looks like you tend to put too much detail in them. They don't seem to have a focus. This is kinda hard to explain, I think a better way to say it is your work lacks focus. Taking a look at Goku it seems like every inch of his body is equally detailed and the lightning is evenly distributed around him. I know you want everything in the picture to be pretty and well finished but you should leave some parts less complete or less defined and draw attention to one central point or exaggeration.
Your pirate's working a lot better in this regard, all the lines go to his face which has lots of details to look over
uh that's all, keep up the great work!
I like your caricatures, but it looks like you tend to put too much detail in them. They don't seem to have a focus. This is kinda hard to explain, I think a better way to say it is your work lacks focus. Taking a look at Goku it seems like every inch of his body is equally detailed and the lightning is evenly distributed around him. I know you want everything in the picture to be pretty and well finished but you should leave some parts less complete or less defined and draw attention to one central point or exaggeration.
Your pirate's working a lot better in this regard, all the lines go to his face which has lots of details to look over
uh that's all, keep up the great work!