Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook

[Rotohail]

i think the colored one has the same color issues and the rythm of the image is concave as in the energy is slamming into one place. Id either push it like all the way, or try a totally different rythm. Also the colors are way too strong again, hot purple against hot orange; use hues to compliment each other, not to compete for attention.

Like if we painted a red starcraft marine, his red suit would dominate the image if we werent careful with our values and hues. Id take his suit and put most of it in a cool shadow, it'd still read as a "red" object but would be a lot easier on the eyes.

The skulls are fantastic, A+ on those

The profile girl, you could arch her back a lot more to push the drama, right now its stiff
this random pic shows the kinda arch im talking about
https://previews.123rf.com/images/scottf...and-re.jpg

keep rockin the boat

Thanks for the comment! As before anything you would like to change, do redlines or what not, feel free to do. I get better the idea like that. I'm interested on what you mention about the rhythm/slamming concave, I haven't thought much on that, if you can do a flow/redline of what you mean is not working I'll take a look asap.

I think I get what you mean with the marine example. I toned down the yellow bits so they don't steal as much the show. Originally I wasn't going for purple but dark grey, black. But I stumbled upon purple while doing some color checks and liked it.
Thanks for the suggestion on the pose, is a good idea, I wanted to make her fee like she was going to start a step or a slow walk forward. I changed the foot a bit but it might not read too well. I'm kind of messing it with the color again, ha. The struggle is real. I saw you put up a perspective thing! I'll leave you a comment later.


Update on my current page, gonna move onto another.