Rotohail's "Reclusive" SketchBook

[Fedodika]

heres a little paintover for fun lol

For your batman, his hands look really stiff, maybe loosen them a bit, take your own arms in that position and see how goofy it feels!

I dropped the brightness, made some more shadow shapes and used the computer monitors for light sources. I like how you have cut in shadow shapes, its good, do that shit alot it'll pay off quick

Also consider a secondary light source like that purple computer to compliment the green. Also consider the floating books and things whether they are serving the composition or not... Do they point back to the rythm of the image? do they solve some compositional question? Theyre overlapping well but some are tangenting (can to book, foot to book) and their silhouettes arent distinct and i dont think they add much the way they are now

Edit: theres actually a lot of tangents in this image which makes it feel uncomfortable, like the chips tangenting with the bed, the can's bottom is tangenting, the various ledges are just barely touching, definitely something to watch out for!

I circled all the tangents, and i could have circled more "iffy" tangents. These subconciously affect peoples read of the image, if theres too many it makes the viewer feel frustrated and stop looking but they wont know why