06-16-2021, 05:51 PM
Wow, that's some nice stuff!!
In the first set, the 2 on the right are my favorites. The 2 on the left look great from close by because of the rich colors and detail, but, if you're looking for a crit, I feel the top one has shapes that are a bit boring, and in the lower one the tree is maybe too soft to still read as a tree. Like, the left side is too crisp to be in balance with the soft tree on the right side.
For the second set, were you provided with the paintings to study or find them yourselves? What I can see so far is to look for big shapes then add variety?
For the last set I'm impressed by how much thought you put into them.
I feel like I'm learning from just looking at these! Thanks for posting them!
In the first set, the 2 on the right are my favorites. The 2 on the left look great from close by because of the rich colors and detail, but, if you're looking for a crit, I feel the top one has shapes that are a bit boring, and in the lower one the tree is maybe too soft to still read as a tree. Like, the left side is too crisp to be in balance with the soft tree on the right side.
For the second set, were you provided with the paintings to study or find them yourselves? What I can see so far is to look for big shapes then add variety?
For the last set I'm impressed by how much thought you put into them.
I feel like I'm learning from just looking at these! Thanks for posting them!