Looking for a critique
#7
you already got a nice paint over so cool,

I think the intention in the pose could feel a little less forced.
the way the food is being held feels a little awkward how its almost at an angle to fall out and feels a bit out of place with the energy of the top half of the piece.
perhaps a little more natural/dynamic posing of the lower arm would sell a bit more feeling.

subjective of course but just feedback based on my reaction to it, not to discount your efforts.
her right arm looks great particularly. well done

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Looking for a critique - by Bananus the Tyrant - 10-28-2021, 10:20 PM
RE: Looking for a critique - by darktiste - 10-28-2021, 11:52 PM
RE: Looking for a critique - by lu1108 - 11-09-2021, 04:44 AM
RE: Looking for a critique - by lu1108 - 11-10-2021, 05:42 AM
RE: Looking for a critique - by xelfereht - 11-10-2021, 11:32 PM

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