01-21-2022, 04:39 PM
I feel like the tree should go in the foreground it missing depth because it leak branch and i think the foreground is a bit to empty of vegetation where the tree touch the ground what going on there isn't it suppose to be a jungle?I see the little skull story in the tree but i don't understand the connection and it not working for me but i am still interest to see where that would go.For jane I feel like she should be leaping at us just to add to the savage storytelling creating an overlap with her basilisk to link the two together in essense.If anything the only thing for that i could suggest is to look for reference to push it probably looking a something like acrobat and rope from refrence such as le cirque du soleil.For the cloth i think something a little bit more original than the classic tarzan look would push you to find bit outside of the cliché already seen costume.