01-18-2022, 07:42 PM
It strike me as odd to see you didn't develop the face and yet i see rendering.
Is it just that you turn up the opacity and have the face already figure below?
Good point
Good thing is you shown a few camera angle which show you have a good understand of perspective and anatomy and simplifcation.You shown different lightning scenario which also show you understand lightining.
Thing to improve
There a leak of dynamism in most of those you want to show more range of movement than this.Think, running, sitting or even jumping. Standing pose aren't going to make you stand out from the competition. Where are the leg of the men behind the other men in the last piece? How are you going to tell if there a nice overlap... and if thing read properly...
I can't really say with alot of assurance since i am not seeing the file of those artpiece but it seem that there a leak of planning in the thumbnailling phase which make it hard to figure out if thing are going in the right direction for those who critic.Maybe you have alot of confidence and do thing in reverse(the body first and the face last) it strike me as odd and risky.But nothing tell me you are setting yourself for failure it just me who doesn't know if you are going to be able to pull it off since you got nothing to show exept those 3 piece so it extra job to acess your skill level. Anyways what count is the result.
One additional thing would be to mention what position you want to apply with this portfolio and perhaps who you are targeting with this portfolio.
For example i see two sci-fi piece and 1 more fantasy which might be less useful if you target some studio that let say only does sci-fi game.
So i am going to stop here because i can critic the hell out of stuff but it better to let you do the talking since your new here and that not me who will give direction to what should define the identity of this portfolio.
Just one more thing there a portfolio section this isn't necessarly the right place to post this but no body is going to come ban you for that i say that to encourage you to look around the forum there even section about resource which could be a nice thing to dig up for reference and inspiration.
Is it just that you turn up the opacity and have the face already figure below?
Good point
Good thing is you shown a few camera angle which show you have a good understand of perspective and anatomy and simplifcation.You shown different lightning scenario which also show you understand lightining.
Thing to improve
There a leak of dynamism in most of those you want to show more range of movement than this.Think, running, sitting or even jumping. Standing pose aren't going to make you stand out from the competition. Where are the leg of the men behind the other men in the last piece? How are you going to tell if there a nice overlap... and if thing read properly...
I can't really say with alot of assurance since i am not seeing the file of those artpiece but it seem that there a leak of planning in the thumbnailling phase which make it hard to figure out if thing are going in the right direction for those who critic.Maybe you have alot of confidence and do thing in reverse(the body first and the face last) it strike me as odd and risky.But nothing tell me you are setting yourself for failure it just me who doesn't know if you are going to be able to pull it off since you got nothing to show exept those 3 piece so it extra job to acess your skill level. Anyways what count is the result.
One additional thing would be to mention what position you want to apply with this portfolio and perhaps who you are targeting with this portfolio.
For example i see two sci-fi piece and 1 more fantasy which might be less useful if you target some studio that let say only does sci-fi game.
So i am going to stop here because i can critic the hell out of stuff but it better to let you do the talking since your new here and that not me who will give direction to what should define the identity of this portfolio.
Just one more thing there a portfolio section this isn't necessarly the right place to post this but no body is going to come ban you for that i say that to encourage you to look around the forum there even section about resource which could be a nice thing to dig up for reference and inspiration.
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The journey of an artist truly begin when he can learn from everyone error.
Teamwork make your dream work.
Asking help is the key to growth.