01-29-2022, 10:45 AM
I am not really concern by your rock.The only thing i would say for the rock is think about small medium big rock and you should be ok as long as you think of either round or angular depending on the type of rock.
For the image i think the problem is you have a big line at the middle which create a very predictable scene not only that the line finish at the middle out. But then you top it off with shape language (square heavy) shape which are often associated with a static feeling.Also you pretty much replicate in a mirror most of the element inside the scene.For example in the foreground there ice on the right and ice on the left rock on the left rock on the right.It a bit worst than that when you reallly take the time to check how much thing repeat.But it kinda predictable result for a ramp+ravine combo.
But what is worst is not trying anything new so it not a lost drawing so don't get bug down by that but avoid to much balance and repetition if you don't want a scene to be to predictiable.
One last thing that could add interest and detail would be to add more element to this scene.Ice falling of the cliff wind picking up snow water splash from the ice falling in the water,rock debris failling of the side of the cliff,bird flying in the sky and why not peinguin on the ice etc...
For the image i think the problem is you have a big line at the middle which create a very predictable scene not only that the line finish at the middle out. But then you top it off with shape language (square heavy) shape which are often associated with a static feeling.Also you pretty much replicate in a mirror most of the element inside the scene.For example in the foreground there ice on the right and ice on the left rock on the left rock on the right.It a bit worst than that when you reallly take the time to check how much thing repeat.But it kinda predictable result for a ramp+ravine combo.
But what is worst is not trying anything new so it not a lost drawing so don't get bug down by that but avoid to much balance and repetition if you don't want a scene to be to predictiable.
One last thing that could add interest and detail would be to add more element to this scene.Ice falling of the cliff wind picking up snow water splash from the ice falling in the water,rock debris failling of the side of the cliff,bird flying in the sky and why not peinguin on the ice etc...
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Teamwork make your dream work.
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