02-05-2022, 03:19 AM
I see what JosephCow is saying when i review the last few pieces. I really a lot of things about them from composition to mood and creativity and you are certainly on the right track. The improvement area i feel would be a introduce slightly more varied edge control and surface texture. The last piece almost has an overall wet modeling clay feel to it. Not that this is a bad thing as it's well sculpted, but it kind of gives every surface a similar feel and texture. From the FG soldiers vest to his shirt to the wall it feels very similar. Maybe mixing in some gouges and gritty-ness could go a long way to convince of the materials texture. But this advice of course is only an opinion based on personal preference, and comes from someone who is also trying to get better in all these areas. Keep up the great work!