mechapark's sketchbook
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Maybe I could make a suggestion about the laying down guy? I see that you are decreasing the width of the body as it goes back in space, which is obviously one component of perspective. It's almost working, but maybe even more important to the illusion of perspective than size, is overlap. Your forms don't quite want to be in front of each other yet.

So like the above is an exaggerated version of what I want to happen. Each major part is in front of the other. Arms in front of ribcage in front of pelvis in front of legs, in front of feet. Emphasizing those lines overlapping makes it feel more convincing probably than even decreasing the size properly.

I don't know if this is exactly what you want for this, like it might not be perfectly in the right perspective, but I think you could use the idea of it. If we saw those overlapping lines going round his body like in the above picture, even if just in the folds of the fabric, it could make it more convincing.

Also I had a glance at a photo as reference, which was helpful since when you're laying in this position, your chest is going to be stretched, and your stomach should sink in. Just something I find mentionable since I didn't really think of that at first.


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mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-19-2023, 12:27 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by JosephCow - 03-19-2023, 03:35 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Dominicque - 03-20-2023, 07:48 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-21-2023, 07:34 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-22-2023, 09:16 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 03-23-2023, 09:25 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-25-2023, 03:12 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-25-2023, 03:18 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 03-27-2023, 09:05 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by JosephCow - 03-27-2023, 12:29 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-28-2023, 04:27 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-29-2023, 12:17 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 03-29-2023, 12:40 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-29-2023, 12:49 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 03-29-2023, 01:06 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-29-2023, 02:05 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-31-2023, 02:26 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 04-01-2023, 09:52 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-01-2023, 03:48 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-03-2023, 09:17 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by darktiste - 04-03-2023, 09:50 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 04-03-2023, 12:41 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-05-2023, 05:44 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by darktiste - 04-05-2023, 06:25 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-07-2023, 12:47 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by darktiste - 04-08-2023, 11:59 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-08-2023, 02:18 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-16-2023, 02:25 PM

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