Clashing the rocks
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Hi there guys! :-)

Have put quite a lot of hours in rendering of that. Will really appreciate any advices you will be willing to give.


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damn great work! only thing i'd say is that i'd go easy on the lens flare in the future. feels like everything is glowing at you. would be nice to see more details on the entrance too, at the moment its almost as if there is motion blur on it, and im not sure what the structures around it are. perhaps some rock textures/ tighter detail on that and the ship (specular highlights etc) would really make them pop as focal points. I'd watch the blur on the edge of the cliffs too- because you've done some bits with lasso and others with airbrush it looks a bit weird, like its fluffy. I'd go all out blur (no lasso) or use a texture brush to imply its going out of focus instead. i'm nitpicking though, really gorgeous piece with a great atmosphere, i love it.

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