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Cool stuff ! I especially like the pin-up girl. I think line weight will do a lot to help your forms, thinner lines in the light and thicker in shadow.
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Hey thanks rich4rt, I appreciate it. I've been studying up on lines lately. So I'll be sure to keep that in mind.
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great work! the pin-up girl is really good. and the Breaking Bad study is excellent. keep it up!
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Nice cast studies. Is the background behind the cast really that dark? If so I kind of feel like the interior values of the cast need to be pushed back a bit, carve out some shadows to round out the form a bit more. The first study has a nice warm/cool evaluation, although it gets a bit flat. The second is a bit more rounded, probably could push the highlights. If you have a lamp, you could try some more dramatic lighting to help push your range.
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Hey - nice stuff here! Love the Breaking Bad study. You also chose the 2 comps for your Howl's Castle that I liked the most (the 2nd and 3rd from your most recent round).
I don't know which one you're working on for your final, but the 3rd to me is the most intriguing compositionally. The second one would definitely show off your skill a lot more though. The first one is cool but just doesn't draw me in as much.
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If you want to take advantage of the facial anatomy studies, fallow it up with facial expression studies. Believe me the knowledge really sticks in that combination.
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Looking good!
Nice poster like the rendering!
You're just truckin along. Awesome amount of work you're pumping out, progress can already be seen.