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Eh yeah it's a bit late on the color idea I guess! It's just an idea anyway. I imagine you could hit your mock up with a color layer just to see how it would look before changing anything.
I think the gesture of the new hand animation reads well. I kind of think the opening of the glove (the bottom) would be bigger in C and D based on the size in A and B. That would actually be easier to evaluate if it were animated.
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Yeah true you can see the opening kinda jiggles where the shape is inconsistent. It's almost there though
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Sadly this isn't readable nor show anything.Next thime use the preview post function.
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It works, that happens to me sometimes when editing and I have no idea why really. Welcome back! We should add some of these emotes to the forum lol. I would definitely use the fish, and monocle devil one.
I kinda agree I'm not so sure how the razor edge is working
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Bump, ok, everything is there. Rip it apart!
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Really dig the last animation you posted! It reminds me of a neckbeard arguing on reddit for some reason :D
Not much else to add except I think your pixel art is just gorgeous!
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It so small it hard to critic just make sure to use contrast and make the silhouette read it more and advice than a direct critic of what you are doing.Also try to avoid silhouette that look like letter for example the bait can look like a J
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Hey, you're back! I think you're probably the only one doing pixel art right now, but it's okay. It looks good, is the angel crying blood, or is it a trail of blood leading up to her? That's the only thing I'm wondering.