Aternyx's Sketchbook

[Aternyx]

I doodle on occasion, sometimes little time lapses. I will occasionally post here, feel free to comment or suggest something for me to try :3

[JosephCow]

Nice drawings! Love how you push the shapes

[RottenPocket]

Hello thar!

Excellent character/creature exploration. I’m especially loving the critters above. I did have a look at your other thread with the finals as well. I didn’t want to reply there and risk cluttering up a Portfolio thread with critique, but I wanted to offer this little bit of feedback here.

In regards to polishing and tightening up a final piece, I was drawn directly to a few areas where the line fidelity could be refined. In particular, it looks like the fill/line edge and colour transparency is slightly off in places, with some rough edges or highlight pixels that may have been left inadvertently.

Example:



These are usually the kinds of small details that help separate a piece from being finished to being truly final/print-quality. While you may not be intending to print the work, I would still expect this level of refinement given the style you’re working in.

Overall, though, really nice work, I particularly enjoyed seeing the creature designs develop.