CGMythology's Sketchbook

[Crowbit]

This once came out insane!!!!! I'm terrified to use super saturated colours, but you blended them in so well. plus the details like the tattoo and water droplets do so much for the piece

[cgmythology]

darktiste: Me neither, lol.  Initially I went for a daytime scene but I felt the values worked better with a night scene.  It allowed me to push colors more as well.  I revised the face a bit, made the chin look more natural and toned down the reddish skin tones on her cheeks, hopefully it looks more natural now.  Thanks for the paintover as well, I really dig the shooting stars you added so I went ahead and incorporated it into the painting!

Crowbit:  Thank you!  It felt good to go for more saturated colors as that's within my comfort zone.  I feel I can get away with more saturation during a night scene, just looks better that way which is probably why I went with a night scene in the end.  Glad you enjoy the details as well!

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Went ahead and updated the mermaid, did some minor refinements to her face and added some shooting stars in the background for a more fantastical feel.  I feel it works quite well.  I think I'll call it done now unless there is something major off, so do let me know if that's the case! Here is the current image:





Next up a new illustration, began on the sketch quite some time ago but just finished it today.  The character design was inspired by the 'Diablo' game that came out recently (have yet to play it but I love the artwork for it!).  I had a reference for the general pose which I did my best to recreate for the figure, you can view that here.  I have a strong idea for the colors as well, but I just wanted to drop the sketch here before I begin the painting process for any feedback, so please feel free to let me know any input!  Below is the sketch:

[Jaye23]

Ooohh, I really love thoose water splashes around the tattoo.

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Nothing major, just that the body of the guitar feels a bit top-heavy on one side.

I would also probably try a different guitar model altogether, but that's just me being biased since I just don't really like Ibanez guitars lol. I feel they look a bit cheap. But they are pretty metal, so it works for the piece.

[Maxilla]

Good changes on the mermaid! In the earlier iterations the intense blue light and orange light was a bit too intense so it stole a little bit of attention, now it's a lot more harmonious. On your latest sketch, sexy demon mommy hehe! It's a pretty symmetrical composition which isn't bad in and of itself but you could make it a bit more interesting by breaking up the symmetry just a bit in places. I think giving the guitar an asymetric design is a good choice from a composition point of view. With that said I know nothing about guitars and brands and what is good and what isn't haha! For the background you could have one of the colums be destroyed or damaged, or a bigger pile of rubble on one side and less so on the other. Just throwing my ideas out there :D Cool to see!

[Jaye23]

Yes, definitely. Honestly it's a fine design, I just have an irrational hate for them. All the ones I can think of using also have a square headstock (which would make the composition even more symmetrical) and rounder bodies which really doesn't work here.

Maybe throw an amp on a background?

[darktiste]

The right pillar is out of perspective(near the window) if you compare it to the ledge it sit on. I would also define what inside those window how much light is coming from them will be important i think as i don't see much other point for light source right now.

I am not an illustrator but for me when i try to put myself in your shoe i am like ''light is top priority''. Light is value it where the eye goes first. This scene appear to be a interior scene i am like where i am going to have artificial or natural light source and how can i use them to direct the attention to my focal point.

Are you going to make that ground symbol emit light? I think that would be a nice idea since below light is often sinister looking.

[Crowbit]

Love the look of the demon girl! I know he's not the same style as you but the composition is giving me massive BROM vibes!!!!!!