Ortani's finished work

[Ortani]

I might aswell post my more polished pieces on here! 

This is a DTIYS (do this in your style) piece of mlle_pysthache's OC Vivian that I painted last month! :D

[darktiste]

Those hand need more work way they to flat in term of lighting and they leak texture take some reference of the style you trying to achieve. The lighting is questionable. How is it value lighter on the bottom side of her breast yet darker on top will she having a magic light a few centimeter to the side. The bustier need value adjustment. Always design with light in mind that what elevate the work. Do light thumbnail to test the lighting if necessary . Dont leave composition and value to luck. Her left eye is buldging out of the socket compare to the right one in term of perspective remember the eye sit inside the eye socket.The upper eye lid crease also dont extend all around the length of the eye they kinda parallel the shape of the eye.