Bloodsports #5: Moving Castle

[ShoZ]

Hi there,
This is my first attempt in bloodsport, i did the thumbnail but it's realy hard to read for anyone who isn't in my head ^^
I did a first version :



As i wasn't satisfied with this i remade the composition to the begining here the new sketch :

[Tooth]

Hey welcome!

I must say I really prefer your first sketch! The simple and bold value structure is working very well, however I'd rethink the design of the girl, Howl looks excellent though.

I don't feel your latest sketch has the same X-factor in terms of composition and lighting, also I feel the details are a bit scattered, as your first piece has a clear focus - I checked out your other work, great stuff, looking forward to seeing you grow!

[ShoZ]

Hey thanks a lot alex, great to have ur comment, i think i'll keep the last one but change the values to make more focus on the center of the piece, thx for ur help.

[ShoZ]

New ideas, here is the new cover, crits wanted pls :