Bs5-Mononoke-RoopeMaatta

[Roope Maatta]

I did many more of these thumbnails in my sketchbook. These are the ones that I liked better than the rest, though I'm still not satisfied at all with the composition.. This is a really hard challenge and I'm so out of my comfort zone. Just have to push trough it to greater heights.

[CanisPanthera]

I'm having trouble too - trying to improve with my composition work. I'm having a bit of trouble making out what a lot of the things are in your comps, so it's hard for me to tell you what looks best in terms of the narrative and visual representation. However I am drawn to 1 and 10, and also 3 because of the movement

[Tooth]

Hey nice lot of thumbs mate. I'm leaning towards #4 right now, definitely got something about it that one. 12 also looks cool.

[Roope Maatta]

Difficult..

Thank you for your comments

[Roope Maatta]

I'm so not satisfied at my current skill level shown in this piece. I feel distressed. But hey, now I know more clearly that I have to study so much more, with greater intensity, and organize my time better.

Well here it is, With so so so much room for improvement.

Final version and studies: